He guessed that I should tone the girl because it takes away from the thought bubble. He suggested that I should add more emphasize on the thought bubble. He gave told me that the thought bubble had too much going on. That there are too many images in it and advised me to only have one specific graphic for each bad influence. I found his advice extremely helpful and will definitely incorporate everything he suggested to my final.
When Rainier made the suggestion to emphasize the thought bubble, she advised me to actually make the girl smaller. She also suggested that I should move the girl around to make my illustration more balanced. She also told me that I should try to make the girl look more younger because as of this moment she looks like a young adult rather than a small child. She suggested that I should make the girl’s eyes bigger, change her hairstyle to pigtails, as well as softer up her jawline. I thought that Tiffany’s advice was the most help out of everyone’s. She gave me more specific advice on what to improve on.
She gave me many different concepts to think off for my illustration. She suggested that I should incorporate a used condom in my thought bubble to symbolize sex.
He told me that I should create a background. Something that would tie the whole illustration together. There were ideas of just something textured, a gradient background, an elementary school, a school bus and a little girl’s room.